Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With the significant development of people’s lives quality, it is an essential responsibility of parents to take care of their children’s characteristics so that they can grow up to be useful citizens. However, some people believe that this vital responsibility should be given to the teachers. From my perspective, parents need to give their children more observation by themselves physically and mentally.
Initially, parents are their children’s exemplary role model. According to the research of many well-known scientists, children often imitate their parents' behaviours and give other people the same actions which have been witnessed by them. Besides, children’s emotions are clearly observed by their parents because of the wealth of time living with them. Children will not be able to become good citizens if their parents lack the responsibility of taking care of them, particularly their emotional expressions. Moreover, it is easier for parents to understand their own child. For instance, parents can give their day-off playing games or doing outdoor activities with their children which can not be done by school teachers.
In my opinion, school teachers, who work at education institutions, such as schools, kindergartens, actually do not have enough time to do such an important mission of educating each child to become a good citizen. Because school teachers also have to take care of their own families after an exhausting day at school. I strongly believe that teachers’ and schools’ mission is only teaching students the knowledge and sometimes rearranging their students’ behaviours if they make mistakes. Especially, educating each child is always easier than observing too many students at school so that parents should have a collaboration with teachers if they want their children to grow up to be better people.
In conclusion, the key of educating a child to become a good member of the society is the cooperation between parents and teachers. Taking this responsibility also means that we are constructing a more powerful, bright world for the next generation in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42727272727 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09436081777 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8957200593 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232213165592 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918615960381 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041902982312 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146778647355 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359789512827 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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