Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.
Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Children are the future of this world and there are certain code of conduct which society is based on ,moreover each individual is abided to follow the good Samaritan behaviour .some sociologist argues that school is the best place to learn hood manners while, on the other hand, few say that it is the parents who play a major role in moulding social behaviour in children. This essay discusses both views and will come up with the best.

To set in, schools play a pivotal role in both the educational and behavioural aspect of the child. For instance, a child graduated from a well-established school may show prudence and it could impact on his social manners as well. On the other hand, a child from a poor educational background may end-up in juvenile delinquency. However, in both scenario schools are the inevitable part of a child's life. Moreover, children spend most of their time in schools and they give more importance to education.

On the contrary, children learn from their parents a lot. Moreover, they are timid and gullible so they tend to copy their parents most of the time regardless of right or wrong .for example, a child will observe their parents because they think parents are always right and they try to imitate them. hence, it the prime responsibility of the parents to teach the children the best social conduct to build a prosperous world. But, they don't get quality time with their parent because of the changed social scenario in both the parents may work to earn their livelihood.

To conclude, from the above discussion it is clear that schools act as a moulding machine for children especially, in building their behavioural characteristics. Nevertheless, parents responsibly cannot be excluded but schools over weights them in most aspects.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, for instance, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96333333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73673568731 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.3843315351 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.538461538 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219122330114 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848412193047 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426454313014 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134034504666 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382690367801 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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