Paying tax to the government is a crucial duty of a responsible citizen. So, mostly every people pay levy to a nation and thinks that it is a major contribution to the society or nation. However, other people opine that they have many more responsibility for the society rather than paying tax only. In my opinion, I think that the people must pay the levy as well as have other major duties besides paying taxes for the development of their home place as a member. Let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision.
On the one hand, many people believe paying revenue to the government is a big contribution to the society as the government uses the taxes paid my it's citizen to provide services to the community people. In a modern society, administrators ,clerks, police officers, emergency forces, maintenance workers are required. So, the government utilizes the levy by the members in such sectors. More importantly, the infrastructures, education, basic constructions are made possible in the Society by the revenue.
On the other hand, other people think that individual have many more responsibilities as a social member than only paying taxes. As a responsible member of the society, the people must think about the welfare of the society. The society members must organize various programs namely environment sanitation events, to decrease the pollution and improve the health of each and every member of society. Likewise, the people should make basic services available in their society.
To sum it up, from my point of view, every individual of the society must pay the revenue to the government. Nevertheless, they have a vital responsibility besides paying taxes as a member of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ple. In a modern society, administrators ,clerks, police officers, emergency force...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, likewise, nevertheless, so, well, i think, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09540636042 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95801298207 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484098939929 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6151486177 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522823810631 0.244688304435 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176316721773 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123748655378 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313825322498 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118281764904 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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