Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that people keeping to one career path are more likely to have a fulfilling working life than those who try various jobs. while this thinking is valid to a certain extent, I believe that people who experiment with different careers also have some interesting experiences in their life.
On the one hand,there are many compelling reasons why people committing their whole life to a job tend to have a flowing working life. Firstly, they may gain more promotion opportunities because when they contribute to an organization for a prolonged period of time they will acquire professional experience and practical skills. For example, an employee working in the sales department for 10 years will have a chance to be promoted to sales manager rather than a new staff member. Secondly, the employee pursues one career and tries their best so as to be recognised by employers. because leaders who will look at how you work and contribute to their company in order to evaluate your ability to work. If they recognize you for doing well then you will get a decent salary.
On the other hand, the current trend, young people who have an adventurous spirit and get bored easily may greatly enjoy job-hopping. For instance, these people will experiment various careers making them realize their calling, that is what they really want to be. Moreover, people exploring a range of different career paths give them a sense of satisfaction. because they will feel very constrained and uncomfortable unless they get to experience many different jobs and discover many new things in those positions.
In conclusion, many people choose to make a commitment to a particular job, leading them to a content working life. while others tend to try various jobs in order to constantly renew themselves and their best version. I believe that each choice has its own validity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71247028906 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570512820513 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7845404237 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1333333333 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301230903706 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101959654808 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840562356223 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200990131987 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927026163533 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.