There is a train of thought that taking a job from a young age and maintaining it perhaps makes people more satisfied with their career than those who do not have a stable occupation. Personally, I believe that both the two situations can bring about pleasure whatever people’s choice is.
In terms of having a steady job at an early age, people can get a lot of satisfaction. Because of earning their living since young, people will be financially independent and no longer rely on their parents. This may let them have a sense of achievement and pride. Additionally, people with a stable job means that their incomes are also stable, so they can control their lives better. Pursuing a constant career allows people to settle in one place as they do not have to move everywhere for taking up a completely different job. However, there are some downsides of this situation. Keeping working on the same job from an early age limits people from experiencing new things and they cannot seek for opportunities to improve their salary, especially those with low paid jobs.
On the other hand, changing jobs frequently also has some pleasures in it. To be more specific, people who shift work can take more chances to enhance their career life, they can get a higher salary or get a promotion that the previous jobs cannot offer. In addition, changing jobs forces people to be flexible and adaptive to new working patterns, they can also experience new things and acquire new skills from this. Notwithstanding these advantages, not having a steady job may lead to some concerns about income and settlement and people cannot assure a stable professional life.
In short, for the reasons above, both the two situations have their own satisfactions and drawbacks, it depends on people’s choices and their personal feelings that determine a pleasant career life.
- The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas of a European country between 1987 and 2007 67
- The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas of a European country between 1987 and 2007 73
- The diagram shows the life cycle of a frog Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features 84
- The diagram shows the life cycle of a frog Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features 84
- The diagram below shows the production and processing of milk and dairy products for commercial sale Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, in addition, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98083067093 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7085002537 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562300319489 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2075985504 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343897904138 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124065383331 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787884436777 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216444310192 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739258777404 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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