Some people think that a person should change a career at least once, while others think that it is better to stay in one job for a lifetime.
What is your opinion?
Few people believe that an employee have to alter from his/her profession minimum onetime,meanwhile some others think it is good to stay in a single career for whole life.I agree that an employee should change a career at least once because it is helpful for career progression.And also he/she will understand the problems in various fields.In this essay I am going to explain about the benefits of changing profession and then I will describe about the problems of being in a single sector for life.
Firstly,in current generation,there are lots of opportunities for employees.Every company is recruiting talented persons to increase its productivity.In order to attract workers,they are providing perks and bonuses frequently.So,if an employee changes career,he/she will receive good financial rewards than the previous company where the person has worked.Moreover,the person can enjoy the various incentives that companies provide.For example,employees from the well-known IT company called Satyam in india have shifted to other careers because the institution has downsized.And due to the reason of their previous experience,employees are paid high in the next sector.
Secondly,many people who have worked in the same company says they have faced many problems in their career.Hence,there are many reasons behind that.Sometimes they face a situation of loosing their job because of the redundancy and lack of job prospects in the business.If they stay in the same field for lifetime,they cannot give the proper output what the boss have asked.Because in some fields,they are no subsidies and lack of motivation from the subordinates.For instance,many hand-loom workers in the southern part of Sri Lanka quit their careers because the industries are outsourcing the workers and paying less wages.
To conclude,changing in career at least once in life will make person to develop knowledge in various fields,plus can lead a happy life by getting good salary.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-02 | Kamala gunapu | 84 | view |
| 2019-11-25 | Bharadwaja Vihari | 59 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , meanwhile
... from his/her profession minimum onetime,meanwhile some others think it is good to stay in...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... stay in a single career for whole life.I agree that an employee should change a ...
^
Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...se it is helpful for career progression.And also he/she will understand the problem...
^^^
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...derstand the problems in various fields.In this essay I am going to explain about ...
^^
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...n a single sector for life. Firstly,in current generation,there are lots of op...
^^^
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...life. Firstly,in current generation,there are lots of opportunities for employees...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Every
...are lots of opportunities for employees.Every company is recruiting talented persons ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ed persons to increase its productivity.In order to attract workers,they are provi...
^^
Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...productivity.In order to attract workers,they are providing perks and bonuses frequen...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... providing perks and bonuses frequently.So,if an employee changes career,he/she wi...
^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...roviding perks and bonuses frequently.So,if an employee changes career,he/she will ...
^^^
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , he
...quently.So,if an employee changes career,he/she will receive good financial rewards...
^^^
Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ous company where the person has worked.Moreover,the person can enjoy the various incent...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...any where the person has worked.Moreover,the person can enjoy the various incentives...
^^^^
Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...rious incentives that companies provide.For example,employees from the well-known I...
^^^
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , employees
...tives that companies provide.For example,employees from the well-known IT company called S...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...xample,employees from the well-known IT company called Satyam in india have shifted to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 577, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...s because the institution has downsized.And due to the reason of their previous exp...
^^^
Line 5, column 627, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , employees
... the reason of their previous experience,employees are paid high in the next sector. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
... high in the next sector. Secondly,many people who have worked in the same comp...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...ave faced many problems in their career.Hence,there are many reasons behind that.Some...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...aced many problems in their career.Hence,there are many reasons behind that.Sometimes ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Sometimes
...ence,there are many reasons behind that.Sometimes they face a situation of loosing their ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 271, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...d lack of job prospects in the business.If they stay in the same field for lifetim...
^^
Line 9, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...they stay in the same field for lifetime,they cannot give the proper output what the ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 375, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
... proper output what the boss have asked.Because in some fields,they are no subsidies an...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 397, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...e boss have asked.Because in some fields,they are no subsidies and lack of motivation...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 465, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ack of motivation from the subordinates.For instance,many hand-loom workers in the ...
^^^
Line 9, column 477, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
...ation from the subordinates.For instance,many hand-loom workers in the southern part ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 616, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun wages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... are outsourcing the workers and paying less wages. To conclude,changing in ca...
^^^^
Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , changing
...and paying less wages. To conclude,changing in career at least once in life will ma...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , plus
...n to develop knowledge in various fields,plus can lead a happy life by getting good s...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, at least, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57991154453 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.343923042 49.4020404114 406% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 420.0 106.682146367 394% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.0 20.7667163134 361% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.75 7.06120827912 421% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237218171065 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137519116916 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537134576543 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137519116916 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537134576543 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.4 13.0946893788 324% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.11 50.2224549098 -26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.38 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.62 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.