Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports competitions are common throughout the world. It could be argued that to achieve success when competing, it is vital to reach peak physical fitness, rather than focus solely on mental fortitude. In my opinion, the determining factor for success depends on the type of sport.
A significant number of professional athletes believe that physical endurance is of utmost importance when preparing for competitions because it is the key to success. As a result, they are assigned rigorous training programs to ensure they maintain their peak fitness. This can be seen when Olympic short-distance swimmers participate in daily hour-long training sessions throughout the year to maintain their optimal physique. If such importance was not placed on physical abilities, they would not be in adequate shape to compete with other participants. Thus, physical fitness is thought to be, by some, to be the most important factor to win competitions.
On the other hand, mental endurance is considered vital when competing in long-distance sports such as full marathons or triathlons. This is because, in these types of obstacles, athletes are required to have a certain level of mental fitness, to push through the challenges. Triathletes are expected to run, bike and swim multi-kilometer distances, during which they may face internal struggles as to whether to give up - due to the pain - or endure the struggle until they reach the finish line. If these disciplined athletes do not develop mental endurance beforehand, they might give up after the second obstacle, and as a consequence, never succeed.
To conclude, although a baseline level of physical fitness is required to beat one's competition, I believe success is not possible without psychological endurance in the lengthy competitions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52879581152 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.989973468 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3770429832 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318775748701 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981455201356 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076392006584 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168983336901 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474861040427 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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