Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The element that makes the greatest contribution in the successfulness of one athlete in the sports field has for a long time become a matter of controversies. Hence, while several people these days advocate that physical strength should play a determining role in the prosperity of sportsmen, many other, including me, hold the belief that mental stamina is much more considerable. Both of these aforementioned statements will be addressed in this essay
In initiate, there are certain explanations for one to conclude that extraordinary physical fitness is important for success in sportsfield. One fundamental justification is that the majority of sports game nowadays required the perfect physique of the players. It is irrefutable that without the endurance and resistance, which come mainly from muscles and other physical characteristics, athletes will unable to finish their games, especially in long-lasting sports. An illustration of this is that participating in the gymnastic on a daily basis or every two days is the prerequisite for every soccer players in order to keep their fitness at its highest level
Nevertheless, from my perspective, the mental power is way more important for sportsmen to accomplish a favourable outcome. First and foremost, mental readiness allegedly spectacularly essential for sportsmen to bring the best out of them. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that the more momentous the competition is, the more pressure it becomes. Therefore, if the athletes do not have the mental attitude, which is synonymous with they cannot set their mind at ease, these participants may unable to deal with a gigantic amount of stress. This has prevented them, these athletes with exceptional physical abilities, from winning. Furthermore, continuously practising in high intensity is never a straightforward thing to do. Hence a player lacking mental strength often cannot stick to the training plan and end up losing their motivation
In conclusion, while physical fitness is always the requirement of most sports, mental strength is way more important since it is the decisive contributor to the peak of performance of one athlete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 735, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...is never a straightforward thing to do. Hence a player lacking mental strength often ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45994065282 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22928020881 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593471810089 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2472221716 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.333333333 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248991720401 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763292276565 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630477067454 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156341567374 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393716876428 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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