Some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additional funding but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors. Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences.
Nowadays, the question “whether placing advertisements in schools is a reasonable decition or not?” has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that productive dvertisements is highly beneficil, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common view that advertising in educational centers plays a vital role in each society.While, to put into consideration, I express why I do not support this subject. First and fore most is that obviously we can see a wide variety of advertisements in school’s walls, athletic clothes and centers, and books’ cover without any positive outcom. Secondly, it can be argued that advertising products often appear in numerous figures to tempt students to purchase their goods that they do not need. In addition to this information, it should be mention that school is an educational place that the cognitive learning of take learners must be raised, while by these improper advertisements the act and behavior of students will be endangered. A group of socialists, working at prestigious university conducted that pupils are persued by some junk foods that do not have any nutritional values.
However, there is no doubt that advertising numerous products in schools provides people with various positive points. It should be taken into account that the advocates of advertising in educational centers think that individuals will get familier with an extensive range of attractive products that are substantialy efficient for students.moreover, they emphasize that some advertising products are related to modern technology as well as have educational content.
To recapitulate, I entirely disagree with advertising in school so that some useful action must be taken into account to address this problem. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some restrict legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nable decition or not?' has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...ters plays a vital role in each society.While, to put into consideration, I express w...
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Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'mentioned'?
Suggestion: mentioned
...ition to this information, it should be mention that school is an educational place tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42367601246 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22356606715 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585669781931 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7735395728 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.272727273 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175056101478 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640275282442 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402501298803 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102855949919 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282677234268 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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