It is apparent that diseases increasing day by day. These illness brings the need of good hospitals for the treatment of mankind. Furthermore, plethora of people notion that private health centers take good care of patients. Eventually, some say that health cares must regulate under government control and render the fee exemption to people. I agree that private hospitals are the good in the treatment of illness. This essay will discuss how private health cares are better and following to the statements concluded with my opinion.
In recent years people adapted adapted to visit private health clinics for the better treatment. Firstly, they provide proper prescription to the patients and follow standard procedure based on the patients illness. Moreover, private cares recruit very reputed doctor with highly paid salaries to ensure that they can cure patients disease in a soft manner. Secondly, private clinics implement highly advanced machinery equipment and gadgets such as laser machine, MRI scanner etc in order to identify the health issue precisely. In addition to that, they preserve the hospital surrounding neat and clean to avoid the contamination from outside world. For instance, according to survey conducted by medical council of India. the statistic analysis shows that more than three quarter world population prefer private health cares to clear the health issue in a faster way.
In contradiction, government hospitals need to deal with the health and cure the illness of poor people. As it is common that population density with poverty is growing day by day and poor people will approach their concerns to these places. As they are government authorized doctors even they also charge for the treatment of innocents. As a consequence to this pertaining reason, government should impose free of cost treatment to poor people and should not interfere the business of private hospitals. Moreover, government can merge with private cares and depute relief medical camps to the rural areas who are far away from the cities. For example, recently there was incident occurred in the government hospital at the some west part of India. That cardiac arrest patient was admitted in the clinic and not been served with the treatment for more than two hours. And the patient registered with the casualty. This negligence resulted for huge damage of the person's future of his family
To infer, after pondering with the arguments and deliberation with self opinion is that private cares are much better in the treatment of illness for people and one step has to be measured that they should decrease consultation fees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this illness' or 'These illnesses'?
Suggestion: This illness; These illnesses
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: adapted
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
... follow standard procedure based on the patients illness. Moreover, private cares recrui...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a soft manner" with adverb for "soft"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ure that they can cure patients disease in a soft manner. Secondly, private clinics implement hi...
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Suggestion: The
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... charge for the treatment of innocents. As a consequence to this pertaining reason...
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...urred in the government hospital at the some west part of India. That cardiac arrest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24822695035 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57857749901 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3386963557 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.909090909 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2272727273 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68181818182 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384802881894 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102823126939 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760792860553 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247367791566 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486111615907 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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