some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
success is a very subjective term. it is very difficult to define a successful life. all too often we equate a successful life with material possessions. yet, there are millions of people out there who lead successful, fulfilled lives and are not financially sound.they may not be rich in the financial sense, but they are rich in life and values. therefore, i partially agree with the statement that university education is not necessary for success in today's time.
undoubtedly, a university education is essential if you want to have a career in profession such as law, engineering, teaching, or medicine. what is more, it opens more doors than you would have if ypu didn't get one. a university education is a great platform in learning more and gaining valuable knowledge in the field we are passionate about. also, The university is a great place to network for friends and business associates or partners. so, definitely, in this respect, university education can help you get success.
however, there are other type of people who make it big without going to the college. For instance, those who start their own business. these people took risks pursued a dream. And, for them, it is very profitable decision. take an example, Michael Dell, The founder and CEO of Dell who dropped out of college at 19.he first started his computer company in his college dorm room,later using company's earnings and family loans to expand. Henry Ford never graduated high school, but went on to start one of the largest automobile manufacturing companies in the world, Ford Motor Company.
furthermore, in today's scenario, people with some talent, for example, in the entertainment or sports field can achieve and fame very soon. the reality shows have made it possible for a girl or boy next door with some talent achieve success overnight. finally, a university education does not generally enable you to achieve successful relationships with family and friends.
to conclude, it can be said that the attributes needed to become successful in today's world do not necessarily depend on the university degree. however, in some situations such as professional courses, it is needed to get success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06925207756 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84317691589 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581717451524 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1025454138 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1428571429 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227326280491 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637317736404 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564299119055 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131191168909 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075433138193 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.