Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Artificial intelligence has been taking a place all over the world . Nowadays, they play a crucial role in our society.
Despite they have a positive effects , they also have a negative impacts.
For instance, some people used to do household shores by themselves , but now they get used to using robots to do this .also , people use them in their word to do hard works which enable people to save time and power . Moreover, robots can do dangerous work instead of human in dangerous sites .
On the other hand , robots lead people to obesity which causes disease. In addition, it might take a place instead of human in their works . Besides ,it affects badly on humans opportunities to get work and make progress in their lives .
To sum up , robots plays an important role in our daily life and take a place worldwide. In my opinion , we should exploit this invention to make a progress in our daily life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67924528302 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49371152606 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 506.74238477 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5471660154 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186092630102 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662792009641 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511529622589 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886831308684 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477768807585 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.