Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, because students find them boring and that children can learn from films,tv, video games and computers instead.
It is certainly true that education plays an imperative role in building the successful career of a person,thereby,a segment of society ponder that education system should stop teaching to pupils by using books whereas,others state that technology would be more beneficial for teaching. In my opinion, advantages of this tendency outweigh the disadvantages.
To initiate with,the first reason of agreement in favour of teaching to learner by books is that it helps to improve the learning skills of student,therefore,in books all questions are given in full details so,they can easily understand without any problem.
Furthermore, learning by books is the best way for students.The point is supported that when pupils face any trouble in any subject then they can easily take help from tutors because teachers solve any confusion of students easily and they know the level of learners.
However,many people say that films,tv, video games and computers are the best way for students to learn,but,it is not good for teaching because many students waste their time in accessing the gadgets.As well as,in the technology gadgets there are less communication skills and also it effect on their eyes.
After analyzing the whole scenario,it can be concluded that books are the best way for study because in the books there is lots of information from which can students grasp easily.
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- Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, because students find them boring and that children can learn from films,tv, video games and computers instead. 56
- Some people think that schools should stop teaching students by using books, because students find them boring and that children can learn from films,tv, video games and computers instead. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37442922374 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03152332174 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607305936073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7024713927 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.166666667 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8333333333 7.06120827912 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237901747388 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102786970567 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683608374533 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122053295522 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567052308056 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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