It is believed by some that competitiveness should be instilled in younger generation while others argue that they should be encouraged to admire co-operation so that there will be a better future generation. This essay discusses both sides of the views and then I will present my own perspective.
According to some, youngsters should be motivated to become competitive because it will help them to learn how to survive in competitive environments which is a vital element to possess by everyone nowadays. Future societies are likely to become highly competitive in every aspect, hence adults should make sure their offspring are in good shape to survive it. For example, in order to secure a good employment, a qualified degree is often requested by prospective employers, however only a certain group is able to enter universities and complete a better degree. Moreover, being in a competition promotes continuous improvement of the whole group, resulting a highly qualified future generation. The more the competition, the sharper they will become.
Others, however, claims that juveniles should be nurtured with moral qualities such as being co-operative and helpful in the hope that they will become responsible humans eventually. Instilling such thoughts and qualities at a younger age will make them humane rather than self-centred individuals. It is often the case that a community can thrive when members are helpful to each other. Worse yet, competition often leads to anger and selfishness amongst people, which can lead to devastating consequences such as violence and manifold anti-social incidents.
In conclusion, both sides of the argument have their merits. However, on balance, I tend to believe that competition is an essential element among younger generation given that they are nurtured with good moral qualities so that they will become both talented and responsible adults eventually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43288590604 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0242198316 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1118081677 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.538461538 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225307423367 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740337439241 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768121500457 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139255069518 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549269305174 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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