Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The majority of people believe that children should be motivated by competition spirit, while others argue that cooperation helps them to be better citizens. From my perspective, I think children in collaboration with others is better than conflicts for many reasons.
First and foremost, there is a variety of benefits that teamwork can bring to children. Coordination is one of the most fundamental factors that can build soft skill and improve public speaking effectively. Through collaboration with other members in a team, a kid has a tendency to learn how to solve problems and understand his teammates better. It is needless to say that interaction with friends is a good way for children to reduce study burdens at schools. Most students are keen on taking part in team activities since at that time, they can not only study but also play fascinating games or other amazing things. As a result, subjects would not be tedious theories anymore, replaced by exciting lessons and they are likely to encourage every child to reach their full potential.
On the other hand, we must admit that competition plays a prominent role in life. Rivalry enables to evoke ambition within every child, supporting them to practice their independence and self-discipline. For instance, talented students in gifted high schools are regularly under high pressure of achievements; therefore, they normally strive their best to look for more efficient study methods to increase their scores. The other thing listed as its positive sides is that innovation usually stems from competition. Thanks to fighting for victory in a scientific contest, for example, a schoolboy is able to invent practical yet different applications that contribute to society development.
In conclusion, while competitive environment can have more positive effects on children, it is undoubted that merits of team spirit still overshadow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96290210586 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3588267923 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.071428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151871953139 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524324119679 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602223316917 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109776012182 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805756725238 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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