Some people think that several short holiday from school are better, while others think one long summer holiday for the year is better for children. Discuss and include your own opinion.
Vacations are very important to keep our mind fresh and free of burden. After long time work holidays are necessary for the relaxation.One of the most pressing concerns is that, pupils should need long time vacations or short time vacations. I am going to examine this questions from both points of view.
To embark with, there are some people believe that pupils should need long time holidays and while other people belive that pupils need short time holidays. The role of long holidays to pursue recreational activities is exceptional. For example, students can be enabled to develop their creativity and skills by attending summer camps of art, drama, dance, music and many more practical skills. For example, they visit to historical places and cultural places and collect great knowledge and traditions.
Furthermore, In the role of short holidays, pupils feel energetic to learn well and they are expected to study with more confidence. Short vacations makes students relaxed and refreshed the mind. Short breaks also helpful for sharp mind. American university surveyed that in 2017 years, approximately 120000 pupils develop our mind in the vacations. They learnt different types of skills and get a unique experience due to holidays.
As consequently, school should need to give the vacations to the student. Because holidays are refreshed our mind, and pupils use it to develop other activities. Due to these activities they become a genius in any field in this modernisation era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25416666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69335280005 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3784661844 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180649135526 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563292485756 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528574531902 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11037264125 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571697063599 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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