some people think that several short holidays from school are better while others think one long summer holidays for the year is better for children . discuss and include your opinion.
It is true said that "An upcoming vacation gives us something to eagerly anticipate." Nevertheless, there are some issues which remain irrevocable and as complex as ever . for instance, the given topic asserts that what do the children prefer more; several short holidays or long summer holiday? Through this essay, i shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that several short holidays are more beneficial than long vacations.They strenghthen their viewpoint by claiming that Academic performance gets enhanced by a short break. The students when get a short break get relax and rejuvenate after a break. The main advantage of short term holidays is that a student remains linked with his academics and does not get get distracted.i would like to bolster my perspective, by revealing that a survey conducted by Delhi University in march 2018 which demonstrated that 8 out 10 student's performance got enhanced after a short term holidays
Contrary to this , there is an opposing group of people who believe that long term vacations are much better for children. To make their arguements convincing, they claim that long summer vacations provides a golden opportunity to a child to learn a new skill which can otherwise cannot be learnt in a short time. Children learn new activities and polish their skills by engaging themselves in any of the co-curricular activity like swimming, singing, painting or any other recreational skill. for instance, university of california carried out a questionnaire in 2017, which depicted that 80% students learnt new skill
during their break.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I believe that there is no single conclusions . still, I take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands and i tend to believe that both the vacations hold a great importance in children's life but the students should be given breaks according to their academic level and their intellectual skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20298507463 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92535336459 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573134328358 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.663275019 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.454545455 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4545454545 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205511751007 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763338022613 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887521665099 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111750552533 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059453609414 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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