Some people think shopping online is better, while other prefers going to the shops. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Online shopping has increased incredibly in popularity over past few years. People are now getting familiar to buy things on websites instead to have choice in the shops. It is probably due to selling methods are favourably changing day by day. However, some buyers still prefer window shopping as an interesting hobby. In this essay, I will consider each of these opinions and give my own view.
An initial advantage of online shopping is its convenience. Customers can find a particular item just a blink an eye which might be displayed on supplier's websites. On which provide necessary information such as sort of item, price, size, delivery, payment condition, etc. So now, you want to get a Ninewest shoes, you should do access the website of Ninewest to choose model, suitable size and make a purchase order so that all needs can be satisfied. Moreover, the suppliers cooperate with banks to develop a variety of express payments in order to satisfy the shopping demands.
Another issue is that it serves at any time, throughout 24 hours per day and 7 days per week. Customer services are always available to delivery and support. Especially, at this time of Corona pandemic, human acitivities have been changed the methods into social spacing, thus, distance purchase becomes more and more important.
Turning to other side of argument, online shopping may cause some troubles. Sometimes shoppers have to wait for delivery for several days and sometimes the goods are not what they want. Take me as an example. I often return clothes because either size or colour is wrong for me.
Considerably, traditional trading which is often specialized in a particular area has already been outstanding and useful. For instance, in music shop, the staffs are very knowledgeable about music and instruments. Buyers can get advice before buying.
To sum up, I think digital shopping could be a progressive trend in upcoming years and bring to shoppers interesting experiences. Besides, traditional shops will always be a place for people who require luxury and unique items to visit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 370, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to model'
Suggestion: to model
...ccess the website of Ninewest to choose model, suitable size and make a purchase orde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, may, moreover, so, still, thus, for instance, i think, sort of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09356725146 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73090649395 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663742690058 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9387476017 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1818181818 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195978687261 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536088817737 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068717064142 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930306937591 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702642027396 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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