Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Materialism and commercialisation of everyday life has led people to believe that spending a lot on celebrations like birthday and wedding parties is necessary for everyone. As with other facets of life, these celebrations should be according to one's financial capabilities and desires.
Everyone wants to feel special, especially on days like weddings and birthdays which come once in a year or a lifetime. One of the ways to feel special is to spend lavishly on these occasions when friends and family get together to shower their blessings. It is no doubt that by spending more you can host a b...
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should not ponder much about the costs of grand parties is unreasonable.
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Sentence: Materialism and commercialisation of everyday life has led people to believe that spending a lot on celebrations like birthday and wedding parties is necessary for everyone.
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Sentence: Serving various delicacies in exotic locations with great ambience does cost money.
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Sentence: These people like florists, waiters, electricians and cleaners who are involved at various stages of organising the parties earn their bread and butter because some richer people are spending on parties.
Error: organising Suggestion: organizing
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