You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.
Write a letter to the airline. Explain what has happened, describe the bag and its contents and say what you would like them to do about it.
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
Dear Sir,
This is regarding a bag that I had left on one of your flights to London. Last week, on 29th January 2014, I was travelling from Sydney to London in flight SE-769. After the long journey, I was tired and when the flight landed just before midnight, I rushed to the hotel to get some sleep. It was only after reaching the hotel that I realised that I had left a bag in the flight. I was sitting on seat 34A and had kept the small brown leather bag under the seat in front of me.
The bag can easily be identified by its contrasting black straps and four zipped compartments. The bag contained a diary which has my contact details, a paperback which I was reading in the flight, some documents, a few pens and a car key.
I, therefore, request your lost baggage department to let me know as soon as possible if the bag has been found. You can contact me on my mobile number which is +61-450539900.
Thanks in advance for the help. I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Musheer Mubarki
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Sentence: It was only after reaching the hotel that I realised that I had left a bag in the flight.
Error: realised Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 13 10
No. of Words: 191 200
No. of Characters: 794 1000
No. of Different Words: 117 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.718 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.157 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.328 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 16 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 12 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.72 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.231 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.702 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
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