Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.Write a letter to the airline. Explain ●what has happened,●describe the bag and its contents a

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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.
Write a letter to the airline. Explain
● what has happened,
● describe the bag and its contents and say
● what you would like them to do about it.

You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Sir/Madam,

Unfortunately, I am writing to report a loss of my laptop bag that I forgot to pick from the over head cabin while travelling with you recently.

Last week, I traveled from London to New Delhi on 25th August, 2014 with you via Flight no 121, boarding card no. AI 234. Since the flight was late and I had a very important meeting to attend. Therefore, in my rush to reach for an appointment I forgot to collect my luggage and only realized it when I reached hotel.

Furthermore, to help you find my luggage, please take a note that the bag is a black leather Gucci branded bag a...

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