Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.Write a letter to the airline. Explain what has happened, describe the bag and its contents an

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Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.

Write a letter to the airline. Explain what has happened, describe the bag and its contents and say what you would like them to do about it.

Dear sir,
Last week, I have been in Auckland international airport to attend my flight to London. And then, I remembered my lost bag as soon as I arrived to my hotel.

The reason that drove me to forget my bag since I was in hurry because the taxi was driving so slowly due to a huge traffic jam; Then, I was really rushed as soon as I reached to the airport.

My bag is black with 5 pockets and it has zippers. And I have many personal stuff in it; Like: my wallet, my credit card, 10,000 dollars and my own Laptop.

If that is possible, I’d like you to conceal my bag in a box and mail it to me within 4 days at most. This bag has really valuable stuff that I’d really need for my work here in London. There will be a reward.

I’m looking forward to hear your response and I’d like to thank you in advance for caring to read this letter.

Best regards,
Omar Sheta

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flaws:
two 'because' in one sentence?
The reason that drove me to forget my bag since I was in hurry because the taxi was driving so slowly because there was a huge traffic jam

Need to improve the language, for example:
you: My bag is black, it has 5 pockets
better: My bag is black with 5 pockets

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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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