It has been controversial whether sport is of significant importance for the entire society or it is just a method of entertainment for some individuals. In my opinion, I assert that sport plays a crucial role in people’s lives.
On the one hand, sports could be used as time-killer activities that amuse people in their spare times. Unlike professional athletes who are talented and well-trained to compete in large competitions, ordinary people cannot take sport seriously and thus, they tend to do sport as leisure exercise. For example, many children and adults have been playing soccer on the street in their pastime although this type of sport requires professional techniques to correctly work humans’ muscle and minimize the injuries.
On the other hand, I side with the idea that sport has a pivotal role in the society as a whole. Although not many people are gifted with talents to become successful at competitions, they are influenced by the professionals to keep training themselves. As a result, not only these individuals can improve their own skills through imitating and learning but also increase their physical health and inspire the others. Subsequently, the spreading of inspiration will raise the health of the whole society. For instance, a majority of young people can now be easily seen working out on the street as a daily routine after admiring the perfect bodies of many bodybuilders.
In conclusion, while some argue that sport only serves as a way of leisure activities, I believe that it plays an essential part in today’s society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17898832685 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0184271586 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3109075262 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230585353279 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840494279937 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560873838211 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151537321812 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496017444548 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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