Some people think that technology is increasing distance between rich and poor people, some think the opposite. Discuss both the views.
It is argued that state-of-art technological improvements is accelerating the gap between rich and poor, while other feels the reverse . Both these views have some ground which I shall be discussing in this essay.
Firstly, limited access of technology is the first negative consequence. In today’s era, every platforms are designed more or less with technologies. Such facilities are less affordable by the poor when compared with the rich. A prime example is when I was forced to go to school on foot which prevented me from attending my classes in time, unlike the rich students who afford a car to rich their destination. In this cutting edge rich are gaining more time to put an effort towards their dreams as technologies substitute manual labours with machines one, whereas poor people are left out to suffer in such grounds.
On the other hand, with the invention of internet as well as smartphones poor people of today have gained an access to huge opportunities which is limited earlier. Smartphones provides a platform for accomplishment of several tasks which is possible only through a desktop PC or a laptop earlier. Thus, poor people who cannot afford such accessories can go for smartphones which holds a modest price. Again growing popularity of public transports has eliminated the communication issues for most of the poor people who cannot afford their own two or four-wheelers.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that technology can widen the gap between the rich and poor and also narrow the same if the poor get access to it. So there is a need for rise in cost-effective technologies which can benefit people belonging to rich as well as poor section .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, as for, as well as, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97192982456 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93718923061 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3515968189 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209182972127 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763612266702 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492155379829 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143272186166 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587101486935 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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