When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Hard work is a key to success. One who works hard will definitely achieve his/her goal or destiny. However, I disagree with the above statement because I believe that luck also plays a key role in our journey of success.
If we are determined to achieve something in our life, no matter how hard it is, one day we will achieve it. For examples, in Rio Olympic which was recently held in 2016, we have seen paraolympic players. Players who don't have hands and legs are winning the gold medals in swimming, javelin throw etc. Thus, it is definite that nothing is impossible. If we interview these players, we will know, how hard they struggled in their life to reach this position. Not only this, if we read the life story of some famous personalities, we will know how much they have struggled before gaining this name and fame.
Again many people believe that luck has nothing to do with one's success, while others believe that people gain success, only when they are lucky. In my view without hard work, no one can success, no matter how lucky that person is. But in addition to hard work, luck also play some small role in their success. For example, when I was in high school I was very poor in social study subject, as I used to forget historical dates. I used to remember only a few dates and go for my exams. But unfortunately, every time I end up with questions linked up with events which I have not memorised, thus I used to get bad marks in my paper. While, one of my friends, she is very lucky as everytime she gets questions on topics she has studied.
But no one knows whether luck will come in our way or not, but we all know that hard work will pay someday. Thus, according to me, we should always do hard work to achieve our goal. Luck may or may not accompany in our journey.
- Nowadays many young people are often spending their free time in shopping centres. This has a negative effect on the youths and the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 65
- When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success." Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. 60
- Some people think that technology is increasing distance between rich and poor people, some think the opposite. Discuss both the views. 73
- Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighbourhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e seen paraolympic players. Players who dont have hands and legs are winning the gol...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...elieve that luck has nothing to do with ones success, while others believe that peop...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211081794195 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.163588390501 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0686015831135 0.0866891130778 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0554089709763 0.046263068375 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.10290237467 0.0685040099705 150% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.108179419525 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0263852242744 0.0351676179071 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.30477919301 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263852242744 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00527704485488 0.00188951952338 279% => OK
Determiners: 0.0501319261214 0.0887237588012 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0263852242744 0.0209618222197 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0263852242744 0.0139019557991 190% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1800.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 335.0 408.028673835 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37313432836 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.24776119403 0.338922669872 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.182089552239 0.251872472559 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.125373134328 0.174417080927 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0626865671642 0.112833075102 56% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30477919301 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54328358209 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 58.2640557225 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6315789474 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5599682381 48.84282405 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7368421053 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6315789474 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 35.8405341712 45.7405998639 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.0737704918 1.45489161554 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283913739619 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.096341677441 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0983680227158 0.0752933317313 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.456626901998 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.120630463732 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102500533085 0.114077575197 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703803633791 0.0781384742642 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.189151470888 0.336927656856 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0273201154039 0.067059652881 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191314904911 0.210909579961 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608966198783 0.0618886996521 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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