Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects they are best at or they are most interested in. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is mandatory for the students that they give more attention towards all subjects rather than one. however, critics believe that it is best for teenager if they more focus on subjects in which they are interested. This essay will discuss both these statements in the following paragraphs, along with my opinion in conclusion.

on the one hand, it is best for all the peoples, if they learn all the subject in school: English, physical education, computer etcetera.it is because, the students will get the more knowledge about the different kind of things, aspects and resources. As, in school numerous subjects are taught to pupils. Which leads to increase in knowledge of student. In addition to it, the understanding of every subject is compulsory for them in order to understand the conversation of other people and to communicate with other religious' people. Because of this, discrimination problem will be vanished from the nation.

On the flip side, the teenager should focus on the subject in which they are best or they are more interest in because, if the students concentrate on the few subjects rather than other then they could score good in their subject and can make their career strong and get the opportunity for the professional job. For example, if a student have interest in science field then he or she can we achieve his or her goal in the field: medical science. Which assists in choosing their dream job without any confusion.

In conclusion, according to my point of view, the students should learn all the subjects in school because, it creates more opportunity for them in the different field.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97435897436 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70373344894 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3501311777 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330544882704 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11358545862 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105163101193 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206994061742 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572519437522 0.056905535591 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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