Some people think that there are benefits in going to private secondary schools. Others feel that private schools can have negative effects on the society.
Discuss both the view and give your opinion?
Some people opine that going to private secondary schools is beneficial,whereas others believe that these type of schools are baneful for society.I intend to discuss both views of the argument before reaching a useful conclusion.
It is irrefutable that there are many advantages of private school education for children.Firstly,miscellanous types of facilities are offered by these schools.I mean that, they do a lot of things for students' comfort.For example,private schools afford many things such as laboratories for chemistry,great sport hall,pick and drop from home by bus and so on.As a result,students feel more convenient.Furthermore,a high class education is provided,which is good for children's future.In other words,students will be more fortunate with private school education.For instance,modern computers are equipped by private schools and these computers improve the quality of student's education.Hence,individual schools make children's future even more fruitful.
However,some people think that private school education affect the society in negative way.At first,large amount of money is given as a tuition fee and it creates imbalance between the society.I conserve that,schools distinguish low-class population and high-class population.For example,only affluent families can afford to send their children to the private school.To conclude, many problems arise in society.Moreover,the study pattern can be differed from government schools and it may not give appropriate education.For my opinion,the strict schedules and extra subjects add the burden to the student.Thus,private school children have more physical and mental issues.
In conclusion,it can be said that private school has both pisitive and negative sides.Therefore, it depends on the individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.17269076305 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.20914189999 2.80592935109 150% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63453815261 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 270.056822724 49.4020404114 547% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 384.25 106.682146367 360% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.25 20.7667163134 300% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 47.0 7.06120827912 666% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3198502839 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21995986787 0.084324248473 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773026629336 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21995986787 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773026629336 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.8 13.0946893788 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -16.83 50.2224549098 -34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.39 12.4159519038 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.78 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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