some people think that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime .Others ,however, argue that the circomstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishments.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Crime is considered an indispensable part of society , people do crime because of shortage of money or psychological problems. Today most individuals claim that government should set fixed punishments for each type of crime whereas others advocate that there should be individual punishments and the same punishments might motivate people to do crime. Personally I disagree with fixed punishments and will give several argumenets on this issue in my essay
First of all , here are several types of crime such as thief , murdering and activities against human rights. Obviously they are not the same level and there may be objective and subjective reasons for doing crime , for example someone do crime because of accident. Consequently, government should use different punishments for different crime.
What is more, if there is the same punishments, people might be motivate. The reason is individuals psychologically think “if I do thief or kill someone, I will be punished with the same in any condition”. Automatically it leads to rise the rate of crime in society
On the other hand, some people maintain that, all modes of crime are the same and in any case, they have to punish the same punishment such as capital punishment. However, it does not match with human rights.
In conclusion, from my point of view, government should use various type of punishments for every crime because of negative sides of fixed punishments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in any case, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22844827586 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01629146802 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547413793103 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0020491459 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.3 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452090574208 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185212866436 0.084324248473 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1247613856 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261894023707 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098228444476 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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