An issue facing majority of big cities is that the original quiet and limpid living environments have turned into densely-populated areas with inevitable noise pollution. Therefore whether the level of noise should be controlled has been a controversial debate and this essay will discuss both sides of the topic.
Some people advocate that they have rights to make noise. To begin with, in many cases, due to the fact that noise making activities, including karaoke singing and parties, are effective ways to release citizens’ tremendous stress. These activities allow people to vent their negative emotions and find a chance to socialize with their connections. In addition ,in some ceremonies or sports events where people definitely can make some noise to celebrate. For example, when people hold a birthday party at home, they should stay in a pleasant atmosphere, chatting with friends and playing delightful music. Thus people’s happiness will be deprived if governments impose strict noise regulations.
However, others still assert that noise should be controlled. And the most important argument is the large amount of noise may cause health problems. For instance, according to a research conducted by Peking University that exposing the excessive levels of noise for a long time can cause detrimental effects on physical and mental health, including sleep deprivation, hearing impairment and neurasthenic. And another point that can be made is noise make people cannot focus on their work or study. In other words, when people try to handle their tasks and the noise will interrupt their thoughts then gives rise to inefficient work hours.
In conclusion, having considered the arguments on both sides of the debate, despite the fact that creating noise can alleviate stress, I still convince that noise should be restricted in residential areas, because of the healthy problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in many cases, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43434343434 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83610030721 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9773442733 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378594938185 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134938566596 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697480172232 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203825245486 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797688486668 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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