In the last decades, adopting creatures for investigations has soared in astounding ways. While some folks argue that the application of beasts in any types of analyses is extremely inhumane, i believe that the research is wholly worthy for the advancement of science. This essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
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Essay evaluation report
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Next, other key aspects of examinations are that
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 364 350
No. of Characters: 2035 1500
No. of Different Words: 249 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.368 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.591 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.964 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 170 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 134 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 91 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 66 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.267 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.896 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.272 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.492 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.006 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ypes of analyses is extremely inhumane, i believe that the research is wholly wor...
^
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...riods and inflicted deep wounds in order to observe the inflammatory changes. Not...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71703296703 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02492738194 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697802197802 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0640766394 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.733333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201846896862 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596997057551 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385327883994 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125924037112 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178326182431 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.25 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 148.0 78.4519038076 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.