Culture is the most important element to create the variety of countries. Because of the cultural differences of each country, sometimes we run into troubles. Therefore, some people think that “ when a person travels to another culture, they should adapt to local customs and practices “. I completely agreed with this opinion.
Traveling abroad is one of the best ways to help human release stress and enjoy their life. They attracted by cultural difference. Due to the cultural difference, many problems appear that we do not expect. “ When in Rome do as the Romans do “ this idiom refers to suitability. It means when we come to a place, a country or friends’ home, we must accept to change our routines.
For example, if we were American, We did not have to take off our shoes before stepping into others ' houses. But in Japan and other countries, we are so impolite and the host would be upset if we keep stepping into their house with shoes not taken off . Another situation, when we come to a restaurant, elegant and gentle are important, making loud sound is not a nice action, we will seem to be a impolite person, even we can take bad comment or even eye-glance from the others. In Japanese restaurants, on the contrary, the sound made from eating is normal, even making the chef feel happy, because that sound proves that the taste of food is great, it looks like a compliment for the person who made that food. Hence, we have to learn a little about local customs and prepare for adapting with many strange cultures.
The problems will be worse, if it affect to spirit of the native people. In fact, in many countries, spiritual elements are very serious. India, for instance, eating beef is forbidden. They could be angry when we eat or have a bad treat with the cow, you can get a prison sentence if you do those actions. In addition, eating with left arm as an insult, because for them the left hand represents sin and filth. Seriously, In Singapore, we can get a fine of thousands of dollars or go to jail for spitting or chewing gum. habits seem normal in our country but in other countries it becomes a serious mistake.
In conclusion, as I shared. It is necessary to learn and adapt to different cultures when traveling abroad, especially, the nation which has completely different customs. We learn their local custom is not only for avoiding troubles, but it also represents our respect for their motherland. As an advance, we should try to adapt local customs and practices before visiting other countries, be careful with what we do because we do not want to get a bad impression from them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 464.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6724137931 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54681590329 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523706896552 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4062097416 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.72 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.56 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260696460652 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752572429982 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107444772564 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187284485132 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140618020162 0.056905535591 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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