Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people often argue that females should be given the chance to take part in such males’ jobs as the army, the navy and the air force. In my opinion, therefore, I strongly agree with this viewpoint due to some major reasons.
On the one hand, there is a factor related to the weaker sex’s roles that acts as a deterrent in their pursuing their careers. In fact, some lesser developed nations in the world women are considered to take on the responsibilities of looking after their families, especially her offspring but when they do in these fields, they will not have enough time.
On the other hand, I still think that they should be permitted to do whatever they want if they truly have passion about. Firstly, there are already a wide range of women working in such demanding sectors such as: firefighters, policewomen and so on. This phenomenon proves that they are still making huge contribution in providing security and protection such as maintaining peace within countries, helping in emergency situations after natural disasters. Secondly, females tend to be less aggressive than men, which is a blessing for force. This will lead to the fact that there will be a significant decline in conflict during the war in their countries. Finally, although the physical well-beings of most women are often thought to be weaker in comparison with men, whereas in contrast, they have better intellectual and cognitive skills than men do.
In conclusion, although there are many people do not support the view of women working in such the weak sex’s fields, I personally reckon that they should be entitled to choose these jobs if they are keen on them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94326241135 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69748861848 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570921985816 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.3931771646 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.727272727 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.7272727273 7.06120827912 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19688848095 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724523037009 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550327154763 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122738378251 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496629859799 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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