Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In the presant era, selecting the fild has become more debatable issue. One group of people think that choice of work should be selected by their own choise. However, other think that adult choose their career should be more realistic. I agree with the latter own. In this essay, I will discuss both side of the argument.
On the one hand, choosing career by own has some positive impect. The first and formost benifit is that sense of interest. For example, If people choosed the job by own, It would make the posibal interest in this filed of work. Mental setisfaction is the second advantages of selecting career by own choise. To illustrate, people feel more setisfaction because of the intrest in this subject, so they work more effective as compare to other work. As a result, they feel more enthusiasom.
On the other hand,it has some advantages of selecting specific job, Firstly, student choose more specific and realistic job has more benifit. For example, in this types of job company pay high becouse of the job are in demand. In 2000, technology has become increas darameticaly, so IT people get more pay compare to othere. Moreover,job opporcunity is high in specific and realistic career.
to conclude, career has become more debatable issue in all over the world. Some people thing the career choose by their own intrest. while I belive that student should choose their career,which helpful in their future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
... argument. On the one hand, choosing career by own has some positive impect. The fi...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...l more enthusiasom. On the other hand,it has some advantages of selecting specif...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...c job has more benifit. For example, in this types of job company pay high becouse o...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peoples'?
Suggestion: peoples
... has become increas darameticaly, so IT people get more pay compare to othere. Moreove...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , job
...get more pay compare to othere. Moreover,job opporcunity is high in specific and re...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...othere. Moreover,job opporcunity is high in specific and realistic career. to ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...h in specific and realistic career. to conclude, career has become more debata...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...the career choose by their own intrest. while I belive that student should choose the...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
... that student should choose their career,which helpful in their future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94190871369 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54029356028 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510373443983 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3205308767 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.1666666667 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3888888889 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369350311355 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113129061044 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099437690901 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231037226209 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884437182135 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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