Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
There is a natural debate regarding the usefulness of zoos in protecting animals. Undoubtedly, a significant number of wild animals can be protected by living in zoos, but I believe that letting those living outside the zoos may bring better for them.
Obviously, there can be some useful purposes for keeping animals inside zoos. Zoos may serve the right and useful methods for endangered animals to keep them from becoming extinct. It is likely that some of the zoos try to create the best habitat for the animals based on their natural habitat which is suitable for them to live and increase the number of individuals. For instance, the zookeeper seems to provide food that familiar with each animal, and the way they give them food may give an animal the impression that they are hunting. Otherwise, to some extent, zoos are the means to educate people about animals. Some people, nowadays, are out of touch with a wide range of animals, so that zoos would become a chance for them to contact those animals and improve their knowledge about animals world.
On the other hand, I would argue that the majority of zoos have a bad impact on wild animals. One salient reason is that most of the wild animals are not able to be domesticated easily. Therefore they must be released from zoos to live in their own natural habitat. It is undeniable that the longer animals stay in zoos, the harder for those to turn back to the wildlife. Animals are often forced to live in solitary confinement which is held in a bad environment in a state of anxiety. As a result, they lose the way to control their lives and their natural instincts, little by little, they became more dependent on the care of humans and are never able to return to the wild again.
In conclusion, endangered animals can be protected from a dwindling number of species by living in zoos in a certain condition. However, other wild animals need to stay free for their living.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rom becoming extinct. It is likely that some of the zoos try to create the best habitat for...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...are not able to be domesticated easily. Therefore they must be released from zoos to live...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43791623872 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485380116959 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7744346698 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272684319628 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110465943117 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585047768358 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200954411349 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348883081166 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...rom becoming extinct. It is likely that some of the zoos try to create the best habitat for...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...are not able to be domesticated easily. Therefore they must be released from zoos to live...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43791623872 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485380116959 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7744346698 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272684319628 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110465943117 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585047768358 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200954411349 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348883081166 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.