10.8.2019: Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both view and give your own opinion?
Many people argue that imprisoning animals in zoos is simply wrong, while others believe that the institution of zoos can benefit the conservation of fauna and education. In my opinion, the biggest purpose of zoos is to protect animals, especially endangered species.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why zoos are necessary and must be closed. To begin with, keeping wild animals in small and uncleanness captivities is immoral and the main factor contributing to the loss of their natural habitats. This is because most animals live in social groups in the wild and cannot adapt to a solitary life in the artificial environments of zoos. This deprivation causes many zoo animals to become stressed or mentally ill. Moreover, there is a range of zoos with a business purpose only, not aimed at education. For instance, tourists make the environment more polluted when throwing rubbish and food into cages or surroundings, while zookeepers and staff with a lack of attention only collect entrance to the park.
On the other hand, I still believe zoos still have positive impacts on protecting endangered species. The first reason relates to the conservation that provides a safe environment to prevent wild animals from hunters and poachers. As a result, the number of endangered fauna is preserved, and also zoos offer professionally-run breeding programs to avoid the risk of extinction thanks to animal testing and advanced technology. Moreover, by bringing people and animals together, zoos have the potential to educate the public about conservation issues and inspire people to protect animals and their habitats.
To sum up, it is sensible to conclude that zoos can be cruel, but they do not need to close down just they built the right way due to their help to animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09183673469 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82572006355 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3708619316 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.153846154 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293866446346 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988056952558 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586938373587 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181710682595 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428578282979 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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