Globalization led to the development of Internet . With the help of this, Many people around the world consult doctor sitting at home. I consider this as a positive sign of development.
Health plays an important role in the successful life of a person. Old people are more prone to health problems. It is actually best idea to consult the doctor at home as it prevents the individuals from waiting, standing in ques, risk of accidents. Infact, the person remains relaxed at his home and explains all issues to the doctor. In addition, hospital is a highly infectious zone the chance of infection is high in hospitals. For example, During the covid situation, Spread of infection is higher as it is a pandemic so doctor themselves suggested to get consultation from home to reduced the proliferation of disease.
On the other hand, Online consultations are not only restricted to a single area . It can happen between different states ,Cities, Countries and Continents. Hence, When a doctor in a particular town faces a problem in treating any ailment , he can easily contact different doctors abroad and take their opinion. In addition, this method is also comfortable to the doctors because they dont need to travel to hospital all the way. In case of emergencies, they can guide the rest of the staff by sitting at home itself.
To Summarize, It is clear that online consultation for doctors helps to reduce travelling expenses and degree of infection transmission . It also helps to enhance the knowlegde of doctors which is a good sign of development. Hospitals and doctors should support this checkup methods.
- In some countries the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 11
- Nowadays young people have to make the decision about their future career Some people however believe that teachers and parents can make a better choice for their future career Discuss both options and include your opinion with relevant examples from your 73
- These days more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your o 56
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Globalization led to the development of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ation led to the development of Internet . With the help of this, Many people arou...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s as a positive sign of development. Health plays an important role in the su...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'actually the best'.
Suggestion: actually the best
...re more prone to health problems. It is actually best idea to consult the doctor at home as i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 566, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested getting'.
Suggestion: suggested getting
...s it is a pandemic so doctor themselves suggested to get consultation from home to reduced the p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...educed the proliferation of disease. On the other hand, Online consultations ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...are not only restricted to a single area . It can happen between different states ...
^^
Line 6, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... It can happen between different states ,Cities, Countries and Continents. Hence,...
^^
Line 6, column 257, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... faces a problem in treating any ailment , he can easily contact different doctors...
^^
Line 6, column 404, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...comfortable to the doctors because they dont need to travel to hospital all the way....
^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e staff by sitting at home itself. To Summarize, It is clear that online co...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear that online consultation for doctors helps to reduce travelling expenses and ...
^^
Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ses and degree of infection transmission . It also helps to enhance the knowlegde ...
^^
Line 9, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...evelopment. Hospitals and doctors should support this checkup methods.
^^
Line 9, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...spitals and doctors should support this checkup methods.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, hence, if, so, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04089219331 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91686432991 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5168922752 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7647058824 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162456953414 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495610013187 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414850678359 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106072299471 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314838872349 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.