While some argue in favor of the life-long career in a single company, others believe that changing companies can be more advantageous. In this essay, I will discuss both standpoints, and provide my personal opinion.
Spending the whole career in one company can look tempting from today’s perspective, since finding a secure employment have become a challenging task nowadays. Besides bringing security, mentioned career path provides an employee with an opportunity to become a real expert in a certain field, and acquire a significant knowledge of the way the company operates. After a while, a hard-working person is likely to climb the corporate ladder, earning better pay and possibly other benefits. Finally, at the end of career, a good pension awaits, securing a peaceful retirement.
However, the biggest disadvantage of staying with the same organization is getting stuck on the job that does not satisfy you. There are many people who put up with jobs that make them miserable. Usually, these employees do not give their best at the workplace, and their suppressed dissatisfaction can have a negative impact on the overall working atmosphere. In this case, the best solution is to find employment with another organization. Many people often thrive after they move to a different company that enables them to express and develop their talents. Employers also value versatility and rich experience, because this type of people can bring additional value to their organization.
In conclusion, I believe that a few, well planned career changes are necessary to acquire a real knowledge of one’s full professional capabilities. Nevertheless, if a job is challenging enough and promotion prospects are real, than it is possible to have a fulfilling career with a single organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...iscuss both standpoints, and provide my personal opinion. Spending the whole career in one c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3838028169 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09998968137 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3453955854 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.214285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140265100562 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447096536238 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518963720645 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751265254191 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525077693538 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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