Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, it’s hard to find a job so when people have found a stable job; they do not intend to change. However, there are some who think that it is better to do several jobs. Both views have it owns benefits.
Some people think that they will have three main benefits when they work for the same company for their whole career. Firstly, when choosing an occupation, everyone often considers about the salary. People who have worked for a long time in one company have stable income to pay for their life. They also get higher position if they work diligently. Secondly, people do not waste time to apply another job. Instate they can devote all their energy to better themselves, thereby being better at their jobs. Last but not least, working in same place for long time, people will be familiar with the environment and also their colleague. As a result, they have support from co-worker and have a better chance of doing a great job. Many people also are afraid of adapting to another working environment.
On the other hand, others think working for different companies have some gains too. I believe that the experience they have is the first benefit. Working for different places, people will try new things. When people work in service industry, they have to learn how to satisfy their guests. Also, working in several positions such as: an accountant, a business person and a manager, people have to good at calculating with number, have to understand business marketing. Therefore, they will be more creative. Because they have tried number of jobs, so they understand customers in all walks of life. They also know how to fix problem quickly.
In my view, I suggest working for different organizations as it makes people more creative and also can deal with every problem in their life.
- If racism and xenophobia are attitude that we are taught, not born with, then the problems that come from them can be resolved.Discuss this view and give your own opinion. 67
- The graph below shows the daily water consumption for Americans in their homesSummarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where necessary 67
- If racism and xenophobia are attitude that we are taught not born with then the problems that come from them can be resolved Discuss this view and give your own opinion 80
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86173633441 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36454898522 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536977491961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1833551658 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8095238095 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354805836239 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123187142758 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104830516236 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23520019075 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659985793282 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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