It is generally acknowledged that some masses work in a same company or organisation for their whole working life, whereas other claim that working for various companies is better as compared to previous notion. Both viewpoints will be critiqued before reaching a reasoned conclusion in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, a plenty of individuals who work for the same organisations, have a lot of experience in a particular task as well as there is the maximum chances of getting promotions. For example, an employee works for long time in a same company since a lot of expectations such as increasing salary, selected for top posts, visiting a foreign country because there are numerous companies which give opportunities to their employees on the basis of work experience in their company for a trip in Abroad and not only for a particular employee but also for his or her family or friends. That's why plethora of workers do job in a same organisation.
On the other hand, nowadays working for different companies is common event. Since majority of reasons behind it, one of them is that almost everyone wants to get highest salary regarding his or her job, if any particular organisation does not pay accurately to its employees, they have various opportunities to work in a another company which is better as compared to earlier company and which requires better work experience. For instance, joining a company to work which has several terms and conditions which are fulfilled by a particular employee, is a best option regarding work.
To conclude, I strongly open that everyone should compare his or her basic needs with job facilities. If he is not satisfied with his job, should try to other companies which have better terms and conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...working for various companies is better as compared to previous notion. Both viewp...
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Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... also for his or her family or friends. Thats why plethora of workers do job in a sam...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the highest'.
Suggestion: get the highest
...f them is that almost everyone wants to get highest salary regarding his or her job, if any...
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Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y have various opportunities to work in a another company which is better as comp...
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Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...rk in a another company which is better as compared to earlier company and which r...
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Line 5, column 557, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... fulfilled by a particular employee, is a best option regarding work. To concl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00340136054 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92222799365 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.950484451 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.1 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369968310795 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154189961866 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129008455542 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234288996685 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127869648082 0.056905535591 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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