Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work from different organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(rewrite1)
Numerous mediocre shops are disappearing because of a strong competition with shopping malls in the region. this unequivocally has many side effects on the local communities including the exorbitant rate of tiny items. this essay gives a possible and ineluctable solution for improving this severe situation below.
To begin with, closure of the local shops is detrimental to the society because things become costly as they reach to the supermarkets. In other words, when a customer wanders around so as to fetch a pencil or eraser, he seldom finds any small shop. Eventually, he visits an enormous shopping store where he is either told to buy a full pack of 10 pencils or else the rate of is doubled because of their miscellaneous charges like their rent of the mall, salesman’s salary etc. Therefore, he ends up buying a trivial item similar to the rate of a full packet.
However, there are a myriad ways to develop this situation in the area and one of the best ways is that government ought to make a programme where they can rehabilitate some essential stores after every kilometre in the region. In that capacity, people can easily seek their preponderant requirements and will not have to buy in double rates. An epitome of this nature can be witnessed in Madina city of Saudi Arabia, where the government is in full liaison with the market union; hence, the citizens are living with ease and comfort in the capital.
To reiterate, massive shopping centres have caused the local shops to disappear which has an ample negative consequences over the underlying district including an exorbitant price of small stuff. this essay; fortunately, gave the easiest solution to this critical problem, by requesting the government in its direct involvement.
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- Many small local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area How does these this affect local communities How could this situation be increased 84
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life Others think that it is better to work from different organizations Discuss both views and give your own opinion rewrite1 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, so, therefore, as to, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03412969283 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80418163378 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2499322493 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.916666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0380961306435 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0148358444916 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.019864493001 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0220476443156 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128121135628 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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