some people work for the same organization all their working life. others think that it is better to work for a different organization.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion
nowadays, there are several organizations which provide better facilities for their employees. this is because of the employees should spend good quality time in the provided working period and they would not consider new job .however, both the views are justified under some circumstances. in this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why people work so popular in the same organization some are not and
lets begin by looking at one of these views, people consider about working at the same company provides pros to that employ in many different ways. some of them are, they provides a good salary to the employees as well as provides a good time to spend with their family and friends. on the other hand, decreases the level of stress and increases the level of employment. for instance, satyanadella is CEO of Microsoft who started his career with a common employ and build a career as CEO.
turning to the other side of the argument, some people feel that the organization is providing a high difficulty level to their employees or if there is no enough salary. so they better choose a different organization. some of the cons which I have listed personally is employees are not providing time to spend with their family. on the other hand, they are facing a lack of health issues for example obesity, headache, and spinal cord problems. for instance, A recent research has concluded that 35% of employees in multinational companies are facing several problems.
all things considered, personally I think working in someplace is having more pros that other place and the organization should provide time to employees to relax themselves
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02166064982 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73948948109 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523465703971 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4099577498 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.916666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316569712716 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106451289153 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698927269981 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198240167099 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644246768317 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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