some peoples are of the opine that women should play an equal role in police or military forces like the army other believe that this work is unsuitable for women discuss both view and give your opinion .
Gone are the days when women had not indulge in police and army professions .This attitude has gone under sea changes ever since the technology took place. A section of society assert that female should contribute crucial role in police military field where as , other adhere it is not perfect for them .This essay shall elucidate both the views along with my slant in ensuing segments .
First and foremost , reason why a female should equally contribute in these professions that women can join in various posts such as medical ,nursing , doctor . which is necessary post in army and some other forces .By this i means , they can contribute in these services during the war period in 1999 kargil war for instance , it was between the Pakistan and India . where women had given precious support with their help to take care wounded soldiers . It had great help to recover their worst condition .Thus , if the women contribute in these professions . it would helpful for nation . Furthermore , owing to spread of education females are able to crack numerous level examination . which was not possible in past time .To be more precise ,learning freedom make them more strong and give them more choice to choose their future in these field .By learning women become more aware to choose these profession in present time . Girls are opting profession as officer in various forces.For instance in India BSF (border security force) enrolled 10,000 women significant post . Hence , woman should need to join these career which improve their living standard and helpful for their own and nation growth as well .
However , A section of society reckon , it is not a suitable profession for ladies firstly, army and police force need 24 hour attention in job . which is necessary condition of this job where as it is not possible by women to present their services in 364 days .As they are also have responsibility to take care their family children . If they will play attention on their duty on 24 hours then it is possible they definitely ignore their family responsibility . which is harmful not only families but also in society . Moreover , in these jobs there is not on fixed place duty transfer is crucial part of these job . By transforming it is not possible to move with the whole family as their children faced difficulty in study as as well as a likeness of emotion support from their mother side . Nevertheless , they are some other possible profession which need only 8 hours attention . By this , they can take care their family and they can earn better as army and police job after some as period it is difficult to continue give their services
Consequently , it is not easy to work continue on these posts .
To recapitulate, after discussing the both views i vehemently voch that although , in this advanced century women are equal to do same job like wise men .they should join army , police navy yet they are some hurdles in their way .al According to my slant , women should make their mind . if they are able to manage both family and job then definitely they should join these career option otherwise there are so many other options they can adopt .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, for instance, i mean, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 24.0651302605 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2595.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 536.0 315.596192385 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84141791045 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47328621338 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466417910448 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5257014068 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.571428571 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5238095238 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 82.0 5.01903807615 1634% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239118581077 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727179023259 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607974435907 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143468122973 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679401098164 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
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Gone are the days when women had not indulge in police and army professions .This at...
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...t indulge in police and army professions .This attitude has gone under sea changes...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l role in police military field where as , other adhere it is not perfect for them...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... other adhere it is not perfect for them .This essay shall elucidate both the view...
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Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ther adhere it is not perfect for them .This essay shall elucidate both the views al...
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Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... along with my slant in ensuing segments . First and foremost , reason why a fema...
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Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n ensuing segments . First and foremost , reason why a female should equally cont...
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Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...an join in various posts such as medical ,nursing , doctor . which is necessary po...
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Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n various posts such as medical ,nursing , doctor . which is necessary post in arm...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... posts such as medical ,nursing , doctor . which is necessary post in army and som...
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Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...sts such as medical ,nursing , doctor . which is necessary post in army and some othe...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ssary post in army and some other forces .By this i means , they can contribute in...
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Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...ary post in army and some other forces .By this i means , they can contribute in t...
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Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...n army and some other forces .By this i means , they can contribute in these services...
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Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y and some other forces .By this i means , they can contribute in these services d...
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Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r period in 1999 kargil war for instance , it was between the Pakistan and India ....
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Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... , it was between the Pakistan and India . where women had given precious support ...
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Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
...it was between the Pakistan and India . where women had given precious support with t...
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Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it was between the Pakistan and India . where women had given precious support with t...
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Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...their help to take care wounded soldiers . It had great help to recover their wors...
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Line 2, column 505, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...at help to recover their worst condition .Thus , if the women contribute in these ...
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Line 2, column 507, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... help to recover their worst condition .Thus , if the women contribute in these prof...
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Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...p to recover their worst condition .Thus , if the women contribute in these profes...
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Line 2, column 558, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...he women contribute in these professions . it would helpful for nation . Furthermo...
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Line 2, column 561, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...women contribute in these professions . it would helpful for nation . Furthermore ...
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Line 2, column 588, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rofessions . it would helpful for nation . Furthermore , owing to spread of educat...
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Line 2, column 602, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t would helpful for nation . Furthermore , owing to spread of education females ar...
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Line 2, column 686, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...able to crack numerous level examination . which was not possible in past time .To...
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Line 2, column 689, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...e to crack numerous level examination . which was not possible in past time .To be mo...
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Line 2, column 689, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e to crack numerous level examination . which was not possible in past time .To be mo...
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Line 2, column 715, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...examination . which was not possible in past time .To be more precise ,learning freedom m...
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Line 2, column 724, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...on . which was not possible in past time .To be more precise ,learning freedom mak...
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Suggestion: To
... . which was not possible in past time .To be more precise ,learning freedom make ...
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Line 2, column 744, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ossible in past time .To be more precise ,learning freedom make them more strong a...
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Line 2, column 848, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ce to choose their future in these field .By learning women become more aware to c...
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Line 2, column 850, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
... to choose their future in these field .By learning women become more aware to cho...
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Line 2, column 896, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this profession' or 'these professions'?
Suggestion: this profession; these professions
...rning women become more aware to choose these profession in present time . Girls are opting prof...
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Line 2, column 928, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... choose these profession in present time . Girls are opting profession as officer ...
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Line 2, column 988, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...profession as officer in various forces.For instance in India BSF border security f...
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Line 2, column 1074, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e enrolled 10,000 women significant post . Hence , woman should need to join these...
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Line 2, column 1082, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed 10,000 women significant post . Hence , woman should need to join these career ...
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Line 2, column 1211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... for their own and nation growth as well . However , A section of society reckon ...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...own and nation growth as well . However , A section of society reckon , it is not...
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Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... However , A section of society reckon , it is not a suitable profession for la...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on , it is not a suitable profession for ladies firstly, army and police force ne...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lice force need 24 hour attention in job . which is necessary condition of this jo...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...e force need 24 hour attention in job . which is necessary condition of this job wher...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...hich is necessary condition of this job where as it is not possible by women to present ...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...en to present their services in 364 days .As they are also have responsibility to ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
... to present their services in 364 days .As they are also have responsibility to ta...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to present their services in 364 days .As they are also have responsibility to ta...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... services in 364 days .As they are also have responsibility to take care their famil...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ility to take care their family children . If they will play attention on their d...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ty to take care their family children . If they will play attention on their duty...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heir family children . If they will play attention on their duty on 24 hours then...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...itely ignore their family responsibility . which is harmful not only families but ...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Which
...ly ignore their family responsibility . which is harmful not only families but also i...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ul not only families but also in society . Moreover , in these jobs there is not o...
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Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... families but also in society . Moreover , in these jobs there is not on fixed pla...
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Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ty transfer is crucial part of these job . By transforming it is not possible to m...
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Line 3, column 730, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: as
...heir children faced difficulty in study as as well as a likeness of emotion support f...
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Line 3, column 796, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...f emotion support from their mother side . Nevertheless , they are some other poss...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rt from their mother side . Nevertheless , they are some other possible profession...
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Line 3, column 887, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ession which need only 8 hours attention . By this , they can take care their fami...
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Line 3, column 897, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ch need only 8 hours attention . By this , they can take care their family and the...
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Line 3, column 957, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...e their family and they can earn better as army and police job after some as peri...
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Line 3, column 979, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y can earn better as army and police job after some as period it is difficult to ...
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Line 3, column 1049, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ifficult to continue give their services Consequently , it is not easy to work co...
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Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tinue give their services Consequently , it is not easy to work continue on thes...
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Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...not easy to work continue on these posts . To recapitulate, after discussing the ...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...th views i vehemently voch that although , in this advanced century women are equ...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lthough , in this advanced century women are equal to do same job like wise men ....
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... are equal to do same job like wise men .they should join army , police navy yet ...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...job like wise men .they should join army , police navy yet they are some hurdles i...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...y yet they are some hurdles in their way .al According to my slant , women should ...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s in their way .al According to my slant , women should make their mind . if they ...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... my slant , women should make their mind . if they are able to manage both family ...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... slant , women should make their mind . if they are able to manage both family and...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...are so many other options they can adopt .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, for instance, i mean, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 24.0651302605 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2595.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 536.0 315.596192385 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84141791045 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47328621338 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466417910448 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5257014068 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.571428571 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5238095238 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 82.0 5.01903807615 1634% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239118581077 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727179023259 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607974435907 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143468122973 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679401098164 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Gone are the days when women had not indulge in ...
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Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'indulged'.
Suggestion: indulged
Gone are the days when women had not indulge in police and army professions .This at...
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Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t indulge in police and army professions .This attitude has gone under sea changes...
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Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...indulge in police and army professions .This attitude has gone under sea changes eve...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...e crucial role in police military field where as , other adhere it is not perfect for th...
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Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l role in police military field where as , other adhere it is not perfect for them...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... other adhere it is not perfect for them .This essay shall elucidate both the view...
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Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ther adhere it is not perfect for them .This essay shall elucidate both the views al...
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Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... along with my slant in ensuing segments . First and foremost , reason why a fema...
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Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n ensuing segments . First and foremost , reason why a female should equally cont...
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Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...an join in various posts such as medical ,nursing , doctor . which is necessary po...
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Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n various posts such as medical ,nursing , doctor . which is necessary post in arm...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... posts such as medical ,nursing , doctor . which is necessary post in army and som...
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Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...sts such as medical ,nursing , doctor . which is necessary post in army and some othe...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ssary post in army and some other forces .By this i means , they can contribute in...
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Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...ary post in army and some other forces .By this i means , they can contribute in t...
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Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...n army and some other forces .By this i means , they can contribute in these services...
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Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y and some other forces .By this i means , they can contribute in these services d...
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Line 2, column 325, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r period in 1999 kargil war for instance , it was between the Pakistan and India ....
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Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... , it was between the Pakistan and India . where women had given precious support ...
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Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Where
...it was between the Pakistan and India . where women had given precious support with t...
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Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...it was between the Pakistan and India . where women had given precious support with t...
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Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...their help to take care wounded soldiers . It had great help to recover their wors...
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Line 2, column 505, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...at help to recover their worst condition .Thus , if the women contribute in these ...
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... help to recover their worst condition .Thus , if the women contribute in these prof...
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...he women contribute in these professions . it would helpful for nation . Furthermo...
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...women contribute in these professions . it would helpful for nation . Furthermore ...
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...rofessions . it would helpful for nation . Furthermore , owing to spread of educat...
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...t would helpful for nation . Furthermore , owing to spread of education females ar...
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...able to crack numerous level examination . which was not possible in past time .To...
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...e to crack numerous level examination . which was not possible in past time .To be mo...
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...examination . which was not possible in past time .To be more precise ,learning freedom m...
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...on . which was not possible in past time .To be more precise ,learning freedom mak...
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... . which was not possible in past time .To be more precise ,learning freedom make ...
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...ossible in past time .To be more precise ,learning freedom make them more strong a...
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...ce to choose their future in these field .By learning women become more aware to c...
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... to choose their future in these field .By learning women become more aware to cho...
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Message: Did you mean 'this profession' or 'these professions'?
Suggestion: this profession; these professions
...rning women become more aware to choose these profession in present time . Girls are opting prof...
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... choose these profession in present time . Girls are opting profession as officer ...
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...profession as officer in various forces.For instance in India BSF border security f...
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...e enrolled 10,000 women significant post . Hence , woman should need to join these...
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...ed 10,000 women significant post . Hence , woman should need to join these career ...
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... for their own and nation growth as well . However , A section of society reckon ...
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...own and nation growth as well . However , A section of society reckon , it is not...
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.... However , A section of society reckon , it is not a suitable profession for la...
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...on , it is not a suitable profession for ladies firstly, army and police force ne...
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...lice force need 24 hour attention in job . which is necessary condition of this jo...
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...e force need 24 hour attention in job . which is necessary condition of this job wher...
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...hich is necessary condition of this job where as it is not possible by women to present ...
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...en to present their services in 364 days .As they are also have responsibility to ...
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... to present their services in 364 days .As they are also have responsibility to ta...
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... to present their services in 364 days .As they are also have responsibility to ta...
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Suggestion: had
... services in 364 days .As they are also have responsibility to take care their famil...
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...ility to take care their family children . If they will play attention on their d...
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...ty to take care their family children . If they will play attention on their duty...
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...heir family children . If they will play attention on their duty on 24 hours then...
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...itely ignore their family responsibility . which is harmful not only families but ...
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...ly ignore their family responsibility . which is harmful not only families but also i...
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...ul not only families but also in society . Moreover , in these jobs there is not o...
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... families but also in society . Moreover , in these jobs there is not on fixed pla...
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...ty transfer is crucial part of these job . By transforming it is not possible to m...
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...heir children faced difficulty in study as as well as a likeness of emotion support f...
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...f emotion support from their mother side . Nevertheless , they are some other poss...
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...rt from their mother side . Nevertheless , they are some other possible profession...
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...ession which need only 8 hours attention . By this , they can take care their fami...
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...ch need only 8 hours attention . By this , they can take care their family and the...
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...tinue give their services Consequently , it is not easy to work continue on thes...
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...not easy to work continue on these posts . To recapitulate, after discussing the ...
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...th views i vehemently voch that although , in this advanced century women are equ...
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... are equal to do same job like wise men .they should join army , police navy yet ...
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...job like wise men .they should join army , police navy yet they are some hurdles i...
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...y yet they are some hurdles in their way .al According to my slant , women should ...
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...s in their way .al According to my slant , women should make their mind . if they ...
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... my slant , women should make their mind . if they are able to manage both family ...
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...are so many other options they can adopt .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, for instance, i mean, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 24.0651302605 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2595.0 1615.20841683 161% => OK
No of words: 536.0 315.596192385 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84141791045 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47328621338 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466417910448 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5257014068 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.571428571 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5238095238 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 82.0 5.01903807615 1634% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239118581077 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727179023259 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607974435907 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143468122973 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679401098164 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.