Some pp believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Tuition fees are becoming increasingly in recent years. The affordability of higher education has always been a topic of interest. It is argued that the government should remove tuition for all students in any case. While this thinking is valid to certain extent, I believe that abolishing tuition also brings some negative impacts for students.
There are many compelling reasons why students should be attended college education without paying anything. Firstly, It is undeniable that higher education plays an integral part in our life while there are many students who have difficult situations such as low-income family, no parents… can not pursue their education. Therefore, these students need more concern from the authorities to continue their study path. Secondly, removing tuition also drives students to attend higher education more which can create an educated workforce for the country as well as reduce the youth crime rate.
Despite the aforementioned benefits, I would contend that, the provision of free-of-charge higher education can cause demerits to both individuals and society. On the individual level, if there is no financial burden on their shoulder, they will not have the motivation to study and drop anytime. On the societal level, waiving tuition can put a strain on government budgets when they pay numerous expenses for education which can lead to budget deficits, tax hikes, or reduced welfare.
In conclusion, while the potential benefits of abolishing tuition for students make it seem like a good idea, I believe that government should not make it free for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...this thinking is valid to certain extent , I believe that abolishing tuition also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29644268775 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68186248431 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628458498024 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9892927873 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242010523327 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852903131258 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056055044917 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151349342449 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291500753842 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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