Controlling crime is order of the day. Currently, few masses support the trend of sending criminals to cell. On the flip side, others think that, it is best to assign offenders who do low level crime with social work. Here, i would like account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up the former view. First and foremost, sending to imprisonment to a capital idea to restrict criminals to commit crime for next time. To demonstrate, offenders who have faced the punishment of cell will be afraid of severe punishment for next crime. Thus, the punishment of prison alert them for further offense. What is more, allowing criminals to live free with minor punishment of community work could be detrimental for safety standards of society. To illustrate, offenders can repeat crime if they are not send to prison. Beside this, public will remain under the persistent fear of mishappenings. Therefore, the imprisonment is must for the offenders to teach them lesson. On the contrary, others have conflicting views.
They claim that, assigning the community work such as planting trees, collecting waste, sanitation and so on to criminals of non- destructive offense helps in betterment of society development. Thence, society may become spick and span with this idea. Moreover, offenders do even more destructive crime if they are send to cell. By contrast, freedom to stay with society gives them better opportunity to become good citizen. Consequently, lesser penalty make them noble character in society.
From my notion, both aspects hold their own significance. Undeniably, sending offenders to imprisonment can help them to teach great lesson. However, i still believe that idea of giving some other alternatives like community work for small crime has more advantages.
To recapitulate, it is well acknowledged that punishment teaches the best lesson. Eventually, penalty should be decided according to level of the crime.
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Essay evaluation report
sending to imprisonment to a capital idea to restrict criminals to commit crime for next time.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence?
if they are not send
if they are not sent
the imprisonment is must for the offenders to teach them lesson
the imprisonment is a/the must for the offenders to teach them lessons
if they are send to cell.
if they are sent to cell.
gives them better opportunity to become good citizen.
gives them better opportunities to become good citizens.
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flaws:
better not to repeat words, like: 'offenders' is used as the subject for a lot of sentences
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 314 350
No. of Characters: 1597 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.21 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.086 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.749 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 109 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.652 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.37 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.522 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.268 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.47 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...low level crime with social work. Here, i would like account for both sides with ...
^
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'punishments'.
Suggestion: punishments
...shment of cell will be afraid of severe punishment for next crime. Thus, the punishment of...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...enders can repeat crime if they are not send to prison. Beside this, public will rem...
^^^^
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...even more destructive crime if they are send to cell. By contrast, freedom to stay w...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, such as, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2898089172 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86372323863 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2226116122 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2173913043 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.652173913 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21849345279 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549882713692 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050898960242 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115536986406 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484878419091 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.