Some say that news has no connection with most people’s life and it is waste of time for most of us to read newspapers and watch television news programs. Do you agree or disagree?
With the advanced mass media, people nowadays all have access to all source of news about problems worldwide. It is said that news bears no relation to an individual's life and paying attention to it is time wasting. I'm in complete contention with this view to a point, as not only does news keep people informed about the society's current situation but also expands our horizon.
To begin with, news acts as the major means of understanding about social issues. Human beings have no special ability to be awared of everything without having a look at official information. For example,people worldwide had little awareness of the SARS pandemic breaking out in 2002-2003 because of underdeveloped media. However, things has changed when coronavirus pandamic spread out, with advanced media, every individual in each country has knowledge of it, which enable the effectiveness of precautions.
Moreover, people can acquire better reading as well as comprehensing skill by reading newspaper or listening to news programs. A piece of news is usually written in specialised words. Attempts to construe them bring about process in self development. For instance, by reading about advancement in space industry we harvest vocabulary about the universe.
To conclude, news plays a significant role in every person life as it provide understanding of the issues around us and improve ability to read. Without it our knowledge may be confide in just a small neighborhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... said that news bears no relation to an individuals life and paying attention to it is time...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...paying attention to it is time wasting. Im in complete contention with this view t...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...ook at official information. For example,people worldwide had little awareness of the S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28632478632 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98720394204 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67094017094 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0553719684 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1538461538 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228877439764 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767675029049 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558380734192 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133166833271 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039521428007 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.