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Some say old people should continue to work, if their condition allows them to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Old people account for around 20 percent of the world population. Whether no not old people work until their condition is not available has provoked a controversy. Some people hold the opinion that the old generation is not suitable in modern job. Opponents, conversely, argue that the old one can devote themselves for working as long as they want. I am more inclined to the latter view on the ground of the following reasons.
On one hand, it is believed that old people are not possible to learn and control new machines and technology than the younger. If this fact is true, so how Bill Gates b...
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Whether no not old people work
Whether or not old people work
having a job when getting older have positive effects on people’s health
having a job when getting older has positive effects on people’s health
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