Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it’s advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Give your opinion

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...e as per your choice then you enjoy more .Now time has been change because everyd...
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...as per your choice then you enjoy more .Now time has been change because everyday ...
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...per your choice then you enjoy more .Now time has been change because everyday po...
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... been change because everyday population is increasing so quickly. People are fin...
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...People are find it difficult to get home , but they world created a solution of...
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... they made hig-rise apartment for living .Although they got solution but mostly pe...
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... but mostly people are not happy with it .people who are living in high-rise apart...
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...partments face so many problams everyday . They cant enjoy their life properly bec...
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...s face so many problams everyday . They cant enjoy their life properly because they ...
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...ecause they mostly remain in flat system , they cant get chance to feel fresh flow...
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...y cant get chance to feel fresh flowers, weather, air , and snowy and sunny weath...
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...nce to feel fresh flowers, weather, air , and snowy and sunny weather. Another pr...
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... problam they face is that they usually dont use stairs , they prefer lift yo get do...
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...ace is that they usually dont use stairs , they prefer lift yo get down which can ...
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... they prefer lift yo get down which can be cause of their bad health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 41.998997996 24% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 627.0 1615.20841683 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67910447761 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18686102929 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716417910448 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 506.74238477 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7606492071 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.75 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106534862158 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059255884652 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760680867795 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789808790785 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170552707782 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.