Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly. what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages
Nowadays, a bunch of students after leaving schools have a tendency to travel or work for a period of time before directly enrolling in universities. This essay is to outline the possible drawbacks as well as potential benefits of this problem.
On the one hand, it is obvious that relaxing or finding a job after leaving high schools brings students a considerate number of advantages. It could be explained that students find it easier to get hands-on experience through travelling or working. Moreover, they are likely to be better at social and interpersonal skills. To illustrate, people interact with others more frequently, especially their colleges, directors,… will succeed in communication skills. Besides, they do not only easily enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons but they can also have an opportunity to see the world.
On the other hand, the drawbacks of a gap period between high schools and universities are inevitable. That is because it is the likelihood for students to forget certain academic knowledge. So that it takes time to keep up with their peers. Additionally, they possibly lose motivation to continue getting into universities. The reason can be cited is that after a period of time of working, they become attached to their jobs. For instance, promotion opportunities enable them to stay in their job and keep delaying their educational path.
In conclusion, despite the fact that working or relaxing for a period of time before attending universities provide students with real experiences in their mature stages, it may cause detrimental outcomes to pursuit higher education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32046332046 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0023271287 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5767614109 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162853510055 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556276627997 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711813699435 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118779205578 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570402742358 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.