This is believed by some experts that extra-ordrinary living beings on the other planets should be contacted and there should be exchange of messages with them, while others think it would be harmful. I favour the later notion because i think they cannot be trusted and can be harmful for humans.
On the one hand, getting in touch with the intelligent minds on other planets can be beneficial in a sense that they can aid scientists to conduct research on those places. Knowing the conditions suitable for the existence of living beings on those planets, can help in dealing with the alarmingly increasing population on earth and the hazards associated with it. By relocation of humans on those planets there would be no rising demand of knocking down trees and making land available for building houses and other purposes. This would have a positive impact on the climate of earth because there would be less global warming comparatively. Consequently, the major threats to survival on earth can be tackled. Years ago it was found that the traces of life did exist on the Mars.
On the other hand, contacting the life forms on other planets can be harmful for humans because they cannot be trusted. It is a possible thing that they might attack humans to occupy our planet and settle here. Since they are supposed to be clever, contacting them to gain benefits can become the cause of extinction of humans from earth, and this would be the mistake of humans. Thus, they themselves could facilitae others to harm them. For instance, many movies of hollywood display how dangerous aliens coulb be.
To conclude, although contacting brilliant minds living on other planets can be environmental friendly, it would give them the opportunity to deplete humans from earth and rule over their territory. Therefore, I believe they shouldnot be contacted.
- Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agr 73
- In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum Nowadays information is freely available on internet therefore is no longer need for museum To what extent do you agree or disagree 85
- Some people believe that the women should play an equal role as men in country’s police and military fierce, such as army, while others, think women are not suitable for these king of work. Discuss and give your opinion. 56
- Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantagesDiscuss both views and give your opinion 56
- some people say that giving aid to poor countries has more negative effects than positive ones To what txtent do you agree or disagree 65
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exchanged'?
Suggestion: exchanged
...should be contacted and there should be exchange of messages with them, while others thi...
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Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mful. I favour the later notion because i think they cannot be trusted and can be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99032258065 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61279370539 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7535148908 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.133333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335365724608 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119779226122 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917452843639 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234663318765 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755535555687 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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