In some situations people who break the law should want instead of punished to what extent do you agree or disagree
At present numerous angles are reported made moreover in some part of the world it is extremely hazardous to leave due to a structure as well as poor level of control on crime. Despite, in some cases actions are taken to earlier before any proper investigation. However, I strongly advocate that necessary action should be taken on the person who commits toilet.
In contemporary world, count of activities are reaching to the sky, government started to give warning only rather than giving the appropriate punishment to the thief who found suspicious after all investigation. As a result, everyone will become out of control. That will make a nation inhabitable place for example countries like Brazil Africa are unable to get control over the crowd. Even the president of this place is not safe. In my point of view, strict laws should be followed by citizens of every countries.
On the other hand, police and other law authority are only found fail to identify the real culprit. For the more tape on is an innocent person who never commits a crime even though get punished.
Secondly, people, who disobey rules by mistake they should be alarmed at with high voice. For instance, someone who breaks law by mistakenly just like traffic rules, high volume of music system.
In conclusion, suspicious person must be get wanted for minor crimes as explained above and for Major crime, it is punishable situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime even though get punished. Secondly, people, who disobey rules by mistake the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, after all, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96638655462 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6204747531 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659663865546 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5551317282 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9230769231 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145520891452 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457447853546 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329400584774 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756556522783 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261429772516 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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